Hi Tori,
Great job summing up the sonnet's history and rhyming scheme. Your analysis clearly identifies the main characteristics of the form in a clear, concise manner. The quotes you used to describe the way he uses tone and syntax make interpreting the sonnet much simpler. When I first read the piece, I interpreted the aging aspet to be about a relationship, and the aging of a love. Could it have dual meanings? Overall great job!